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posted by Agus D. Priyanto at 6:50 AM
English for Academic Purposes
This blog is created as a discussion channel for the students of EAP class (especially N-1) at the Language Centre of UNS. Using this blog, students can learn from each other, not merely from their teacher.
Wednesday, February 01, 2006
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Ocha, this is a nice story about Solo city. Some revisions to consider:
1. They are all open for.... (they here refers to Mangkunegaran, alkid, Kalitan...etc)
2. You do not need to use "to" after "can"
3. "entertain" is a verb, the noun is "entertainment"
3. Better conjuction in the last sentence is probably "where".
Congratulations!
Tri Asmoro and Sri Supatmei from Wonogiri...
You also have a good story of Wonogiri. There are only few misspellings and grammatical errors:
1. ..because many people produce gaplek.
2. trees, NOT tress
3. prevent, NOT preven
4. Wonogiri has (NOT have) gajahmungkur dam (NOT dumb).
5. We can find (NOT found).
6. People is plural, you do not need "s", and use "are" not "is"
Well, keep learning.
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